Ery (gonna try this for a final time!)

Hi, just a couple things need to be fixed:

You missed the first two sections of the form, "Out-of-Character Name" and "Age". You do not need to add personality on to the form - please use the form as it is.

Please review the Character Creation section of the Guidebook, particularly regarding word count requirements for Appearance & Personality.

We do ages in years, so that section needs to be fixed.

"Tracking" is not a skill. Please review the Skills Page in the Guidebook.

You used a different name in appearance than you have on the profile - and both appearance descriptions are super different. The bit in his profile about the ram horns needs to be corrected so that it's obvious it's an accessory rather than a natural feature.