Am I doing this right?

Citadel had finished a lesson with his dad, and decided to spend a little more time in the Col. Trying to get a feel for the odd stances The Warlord had instructed him in. They felt unfamiliar and awkward on his body, and his oversized paws left him feeling far too clumsy any time he spread his legs to ‘find his centre of balance’ as his dad had explained it.

He was concentrating so completely on his body and trying to remember his dad's instructions, that he didn't realise another wolf had approached until his bear, Rook, cleared his throat. Catching the boy’s attention with the sound. He lifted his head to look at the older woman. “Hello” he said, recognizing their markings that identified her as family.


"Citadel"