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Ery (gonna try this for a final time!)



Ery


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05-23-2019, 11:18 AM
Character's Name: Ery
Character Age: 2 winters
Season of Birth: fall
Adult Height: A tall 35”
Build: A medium build.
Appearance Description: Swathed in shades of the night, his fur is composed of various shades of blues and purples. Darker blues cover most of his back and shoulders as well as the top of his head, ears, and the sides of his face. A very pale blue colors Daemona’s muzzle, covering the length of his snout.. Pale blueish fur fluffs up on his chest, often making him seem bigger than he truly is. the coloring stretches down to cover his underbelly as well. Lighter shades of purple and blue stripe across his hind quarters and back legs. His tail is very long and fluffy, taking on the same light blue of his chest before darkening to the same dark blue at the tip. His front paws are very large in comparison to most wolves, with very long and formidable golden claws.
Skills: Hunting and tracking.
Personality: Mischievous - Cruel - Unforgiving - Sadist - Antisocial

Any bought things:

A pair of HEADDRESS ram horns. Approved by Sea.



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ContributorPride - PansexualEaster 2022Rapid Poster - SilverToys for Tots
05-24-2019, 05:28 PM
Hi, just a couple things need to be fixed:

You missed the first two sections of the form, "Out-of-Character Name" and "Age". You do not need to add personality on to the form - please use the form as it is.

Please review the Character Creation section of the Guidebook, particularly regarding word count requirements for Appearance & Personality.

We do ages in years, so that section needs to be fixed.

"Tracking" is not a skill. Please review the Skills Page in the Guidebook.

You used a different name in appearance than you have on the profile - and both appearance descriptions are super different. The bit in his profile about the ram horns needs to be corrected so that it's obvious it's an accessory rather than a natural feature.